Word on the Web:
Keishon, Avid Book Reader, C
Jane really didn’t deserve Chase. No, seriously, she didn’t. He was too patient while she figured it all out. Bottom line is that Jane annoyed me royally hence the C grade.
Dear Author, Jane, B+
It’s really beautiful to see Jane gain her courage and embrace her confidence at the end of the story.
Monkey Bear Reviews, Sarah, B+ (see this link for links to more reviews)
I love Victoria Dahl’s signature style. Her characters are flawed and she doesn’t provide moonlight and roses at the end of her books. For fans of hot contemporary romance, I can highly recommend Lead Me On.
All About Romance, Jean Wren, B-,
Chase is as much therapist as he is comfort food, friend, and blow-up doll, and the book is all about Jane’s problems, Jane’s prejudices, Jane’s insecurities. … I’m pretty sure their relationship will even out, but the journey towards the happy ending is too unequal for my preference.
Babbling About Books, Katiebabs, B
There are some moments of humor in Lead Me On, especially when you find out what Jane’s true name is and the way Chase tries to understand Jane’s desperate need for physical love. Chase refuses to be a stud service for Jane and he confronts her every chance he can get. Their encounters are steamy even though I would have liked a bit more of them over the investigating they do together in regard to Jessie.
Racy Romance Review:
Readers of Dahl’s Tumble Creek trilogy have met Jane Morgan, administrative assistant Quinn Jennings, the architect hero of book two, Start Me Up. Jane appears to be a very straight laced young woman. As we meet her in LMO, she is at dinner, unceremoniously dumping her high profile attorney boyfriend. In short order, she meets and becomes attracted to William Chase, a demolition expert doing some work for her boss. Chase is the opposite of the kind of professional, conservative man Jane wants to date: big, brawny, tattooed, jeans-wearing, working class. But she can’t help but be attracted to him, and they begin what she views as a no strings one night stand.
Jane has a background she is embarrassed by: her trailer park upbringing, her mother’s marriages to prison inmates, her rough and tumble motorcycle riding family, her step father’s rap sheet, and her brother’s brushes with the law. Jane suffers from a paralyzing fear that her background will be discovered — she’s even changed her name from the hysterically amusing one her mother gave her — and it’s prevented her from accepting her own past mistakes, her imperfect but loving family, and from developing honest, deep relationships, platonic or otherwise, with the people in her new life. At one point, Quinn comforts her and she thinks, “If he knew the real her—the brash, angry girl who’d grown up in half a dozen trailer parks—he wouldn’t be so sure of his opinion.”
There are some very funny bits in this book, although it’s more serious than the first two in the series. Here’s an example of the humor:
“Why is there a heavy bag in your spare bedroom?”
Jane looked up from the book she was reading to try to take her mind off her worry. The book wasn’t working. Neither was the movie playing on television.
“I box for exercise.”
“Really? Boxing? That’s kind of hot.”
“You say that about a lot of things.”
“Seriously, you sweating and half-naked while you beat the shit out of that big red bag? That’s hot.”
“Why would I be half-naked?”
“Er…Because you like me?”
As the AAR review suggests, Chase is darn near perfect. He has to be, with so much going on in Jane’s life — not just her personal issues, but the legal trouble her brother is in, and a related suspense plot (as many other reviewers have noted, the suspense aspects of Dahl’s trilogy are the weakest). I find that the more messed up one character is, the more it makes sense (although it’s not required) to have a really centered, mature partner with boundless patience and empathy. Like Elle and Dan in Dirty, or Zadist and Bella in Lover Awakened, or Lily and Alex in Kleypas’s Then Came You.
I especially love it when it’s the male partner in a heterosexual romance who is called on to be the port in the storm. I was reading LMO, and thinking about what I liked about Chase, and about this book. Take this scene:
“I’m sorry. I can’t do this. I need to break it off. Completely.”
“Uh-huh.”
Jane stopped in her tracks and spun to face him. “What does that mean?”
“It means I don’t believe you.”
“Why?” she huffed.
“I’m not sure. Maybe because we just made love?”
“No. We had sex, Chase.”Intellectually, Chase knew that should have hurt, but it was so obviously a lie that his heart didn’t even twitch.
She’d meant to break it off when he’d shown up, just as she’d meant to break it off several other times in their short relationship. But she couldn’t do it. Not when she wanted him. She liked him, and she needed his body, and Chase knew that eventually those two things would mesh together and create something much more intense. Just as it had for him.
Chase is very strong without being domineering. In another book, a Big Misunderstanding would have ensued after Jane said “I can’t do this”, as Chase’s ego forced him to throw up a wall of macho and play Jane’s game. Chase had the kind of strength that needs inner resources, not outward force. It’s quiet, and it’s aimed at Jane’s good, not proving his masculinity to himself or the world. He doesn’t force her to believe him, either through emphatic seduction or a verbal tongue lashing. She’ll come around, and his challenge is to find the line between understanding and being a doormat while she does. I got the sense that the AAR reviewer thought he crossed into doormat territory, but I wonder if she would have felt the same if Chase had been the heroine?
I think Robin’s DA review mentioned how surprising this book was, and I agree. I could not have predicted how it was going to go — in a good way, not in the erratic were-unicorn-sprouts-tentacles romance way. The most surprising thing to me was that a book that veered into one of my most hated “tropes” in the genre — the association of socioeconomic class with morality (see below), generated most of the conflict. Dahl ends up complicating Jane’s family in interesting ways — how do you forge adult relationships parents whose “best” was frankly not good enough, and caused psychological harm? And how does your ability to forgive them intersect with your own harsh judgments of your teenage promiscuity?
I went from being really irritated with Jane for being ashamed of her “trailer trash” upbringing, to feeling a good deal of sympathy for her — not because she was poor, but because she had no balance, no perspective on the good things in her life. (Although I did wonder why, if she was so determined to put her life behind her, she only moved 10 minutes away from her childhood home. I know there’s some brief cover in the book on that point, but it wasn’t terribly convincing, IMO.)
I have been thinking a lot about the association of class status with morality, especially sexual morality, in this book and others like it. Jane likes sex, she likes er- vigorous sex, and she likes manly men, and somehow this gets associated in her mind with the unsafe and promiscuous sex she had as a teen, and then with her class status. She keeps referencing her “true nature” and I occasionally got weird Social Darwinist vibes when she did. She worries at several points that she is “turning into my mother”, and her mother’s faults came off to me as much about her chasing men and lack of sexual self-control as the choice of incarcerated and therefore poor men, faults that were again connected in the text with low socioeconomic class.
In the US, the phrase “trailer trash” [is supposed to] say so much more about a person than how much money they have: it’s a catch all for a lot of classist moralistic judgments about the supposed sexuality or other morally significant, and blameworthy, practices of the poor (such as, paradoxically, wastefulness with money — especially the state’s money, theft, vice, etc.). My own experience so far is that contemporary romance as a subgenre is saturated with middle class (yes, bourgeois) morality, and its portrayals of the poor and super rich are very entrenched in the middle class perspective.
So, for example, old money in US families, or professionalism in protagonists, is often associated with conservatism, in dress, sexual morality, manners, politics, etc. When Jane dumps her well to do, successful boyfriend int he opening scene, there’s a reference to his lack of sexual prowess. Chase, being the earthier, seemingly working class type (we find out later he is college educated and, despite humble origins, comfortably middle class) is the sensualist who knows how to handle a woman with the same class-based urges. Obviously, a narrative about what it tales to be a “real man” is part of the story, too.
Oh, I know, there are books (I just read Morning Glory, for example, which fits this bill), where extreme poverty is given a patina of sainthood, but from my point of view, this is, again, reflective of a middle class tendency to romanticize the poor whenever they are not being demonized. Also, there are books in which the born-very-rich are the heroes, morally and in every other way, but, in keeping with middle class suspicion of unearned wealth, I find that in such books there is typically emphasis on what that wealthy character has done to deserve his money.
I think this is very complicated, a kind of bizarre overlapping of often contradictory ideas that don’t make logical sense (for example, the idea that there is more crime among the poor. There may be more imprisonment among the poor, and there may even be more arrests among the poor, proportionately, but that doesn’t tell us much about law breaking and class).
While there were moments in the text that made me squirm, this isn’t a criticism, so much as an observation I wanted to record. It’s just interesting to me to see how gender norms, class assumptions and morality interact in books like this. I’m sure someone smart has written on it, and I’d be interested to know what they’ve said.
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#1 by Jill Sorenson on February 2, 2010 - 8:11 am
You’ve touched on so many interesting things about this book! I started reading it at the park while my kids played, LMAO in public at the opening scene. The class issues made me uncomfortable as the story progressed, however. My upbringing was a little different from Jane’s, but decidedly humble. I’m proud of that. I love working class men. My husband and my dad both belong in that category. Often, Jane’s interior monologue was insulting to Chase (and to all manual laborers), and her enjoyment of the physical encounters felt like a shameful rehash of her past. I liked that she was turned on by Chase’s muscles and tattoo and rough hands–these details are very sexy to me, as well. But I squirmed a bit at her prejudices, even though I understood them.
Overall, I enjoyed the book a lot, and appreciate the bold choices Dahl made with this unique, sometimes unlikable heroine.
#2 by April on February 2, 2010 - 10:52 am
Many interesting points here. I often think about class in these romance novels–more often in the historicals (which, BTW, endlessly piss me off with their double-standards regarding the aristocracy and women’s rights, virgin sex kittens– presenting a so-called “generous” land-lord [oxy-moron much] or some duke that apparently is gallant and respectful that has a mistress tucked away on the side [gross]).
You said:
Yes, I’ve noticed that sex studs tend to come from the working class in romance novels and TV shows. Almost as if it requires a man who employees himself through physical labor for the sex to be wonderful (although, in my experience, that’s not necessarily true). Yet, Chase ended up not being exactly what she thought he was–a base-born blue collar worker with no thought in his head for anything but sex.
I feel as if Dahl was winking at all sorts of stereotypes in this book. She presented the standard naughty librarian type in this novel, and flipped that stereotype on its head. Jane is a good girl in glasses and a bun, but a very BAD girl when she lets down her hair. Too cliche not to be purposeful and funny.
That’s why I loved this book. There was so much potential for that “ugh” moment when a romance novel begins down a path of most resistance. When there are obstacles that are unrealistic and contrived and make my chest hurt from apprehension for the characters and annoyance with the author.
#3 by Janet W on February 2, 2010 - 11:35 am
You have made me want to read this book — why? Because it reminds me a bit of Midnight Bayou by Nora Roberts: http://www.likesbooks.com/cgi-bin/bookReview.pl?BookReviewId=870 … one of my faves of hers. Class, self-image, families of origin … it all enters in altho obviously, these are different stories.
Enjoyed the review!
#4 by Victoria Dahl on February 2, 2010 - 1:38 pm
Thank you for such a great, insightful review! I just wanted to add a little tidbit from my own take on the issues of class and sexuality in Lead Me On. Jane’s immediate ex is DEFINITELY not good in bed (heh), but for me, Jane’s dissatisfaction with other her white-collar sexual encounters is more to do with the fact that she’s dating men she’s not truly attracted to. She’s purposefully avoiding the kinds of men who arouse her. Now, granted, this is all about prejudice & stereotype (big, blue-collar guy = not husband material), and she obviously needs to work through that. But I think you’ll find from my previous books that I don’t intend to equate any socioeconomic status with earthiness or sexual prowess.
I most emphatically do NOT want to leave that impression and I’m sorry if I did! After all, in the previous book, nerdy, white-collar Quinn does his girlfriend against a wall in an alley while whispering dirty thoughts into her ear.
Thanks again. I hope you don’t mind my joining in!!! I love, love, love it when people make me think about my own books.
#5 by katiebabs on February 2, 2010 - 8:55 pm
Great review Jessica! You said it all perfectly.
#6 by Magdalen on February 3, 2010 - 11:41 am
I haven’t read the book yet, but your review is fascinating to me nonetheless. I believe that as in real life, protagonists in fiction have to build on their youthful experiences to shape their adult actions and self. This can lead to a lot of pendulum behavior — where the adult self wants to be as UNLIKE the youthful self and family as possible — as well as some “striving to be like one’s mother/father/sibling” feelings of inadequacy.
Economic origins can be part of that youth, so that a constellation of experiences more or less connected to being poor is the very thing the protagonist is trying to escape while still fearing may be an indelible part of his/her character. But there are other childhood situations completely unrelated to economics: violence, alcohol abuse, emotional abuse, enmeshment, neglect — none of those is limited to families living in poverty. (Sorry for all the psychobabble buzz words, but I’ve read romances where a protagonist was struggling to outgrow and recover from an upbringing marked by one or more of these situations.)
As a court-appointed attorney in a poor county, I have represented clients who might be dismissed as “trailer trash.” I found a wide range of character traits (good and bad) among the people I’ve met in those cases. One thing seems pretty obvious to me (middle-class my entire life, barring a brief stint on food stamps in my 20s) and that is that poverty reduces dramatically the feeling that people have options. You need options to feel like you have choices, and you need to feel like you have choices to take responsibility for your life and bask in the sense that you’ve done well.
Flip that over, and a character from a poor family who doesn’t feel like she’s got options may still feel “poor” regardless of how much money’s in her bank account. So — is it the economics at work, or the powerlessness? And while money buys options and opportunities in many situations, there are a lot of financially secure people in romances still acting as though their past is “this close” to catching up with them.
Fascinating topic — thanks for getting me to think about it!!
#7 by Jessica on February 4, 2010 - 7:02 am
@Jill Sorenson:
Yes, this is how I felt as well. Thank you for sharing your perspective.
@April:
I hadn’t thought of this aspect of Jane’s portrayal. Great point. I guess, for me, like for Jill, at times the narrative felt too close to assenting to some of the stereotypes. I don’t feel like this is how it ended up, at all, but I did feel this way at the beginning, and it cast a bit of a shadow over the book, which I otherwise really enjoyed.
Janet — thanks for the connection and the rec. I am always thinking, ” I need to read more Nora Roberts”. I feel like I am missing a crucial part of my romance education otherwise.
@Victoria Dahl:
Thanks for chiming in. When I write reviews, they are really never about the flesh and blood author, although I understand that if you are the flesh and blood person who wrote the book, it’s hard to see it this way.
I think certain narratives get uptake in our culture, by writers and readers alike. Some narratives are too strange or beyond the pale to occur to an author or to work at all for readers. We’re all sort of pulling from the same cultural soup, although we put our own spin on interpretation. But we live in a society that is unjust in many ways, so some of these narratives will be implicated in that. It’s not anybody’s fault, or rather, it’s everybody’s.
You’ve written three books I spent several hours with this year and really enjoyed. even my nitpicky analysis is part of the fun for me (kind of value added). So thank you!
@katiebabs: Thanks, KB.
@Magdalen:
This is a great point, and I totally agree. even though you haven’t read the book, your points have helped me to understand Jane’s motivations. Thank you.
#8 by Ariel/Sycorax Pine on February 7, 2010 - 10:42 pm
I too just read “Morning Glory” and found it at first fresh and enthralling in its treatment of a different set of class issues and thus daily concerns and priorities than the other historical romances I had been reading. Particularly their willingness/desperation to make a marriage of convenience (although “convenience” seems hardly the word – how about “marriage of grindingly hard mutual effort”?) to escape from an economic doom that threatened them both independently, even in the face of the fact that neither looks particularly lust-inducing or even healthy. But as it wound on, somehow the work on the farm became magically easy to keep up (even when almost 50% of the family workforce takes up other duties, I say in an attempt to avoid wandering into spoilers), and the whole thing seemed more ideologically and generically conservative as it veered into a cross between a bourgeois pastoral and a certain type of wartime fiction. In the end, I still found it well-constructed and refreshing, but not as convention-challenging a romance or ideologically radical a treatment of working-class experiences as the beginnings of the novel had led me to hope for….
Maybe what I am craving is this: for someone to pick up the Edith Wharton strain of the social novel (the strain that is always an undercurrent in Austen as well) – the painstakingly drawn idea that economic realities are actively shaping, or even determining, the emotional lives of the characters, even to the extent of threatening their happiness. This is a very hard note of urgency to sound sincerely in modern novels, it seems to me, where we read with bourgeois assumptions that love is a sort of emotional free will that trumps any other considerations. Hmm. I will have to think more about this.
#9 by heidenkind on February 8, 2010 - 1:51 am
Hmmmm.
I haven’t read this book, but I find it interesting that Jane is “trailer trash,” as you put it, simply because I live in Colorado and there’s really no such thing as trailer trash here. Not that we don’t have our own socioeconomic classes OR that people don’t live in trailers, but the two don’t really go together. I know where my mom grew up in Illinois they definitely did, but around here it doesn’t make that big of a dif.
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#10 by RfP on February 9, 2010 - 12:48 pm
I think that varies enormously by publisher’s line and by author, and sometimes within a single author’s oeuvre. Look at all the Harlequin Presents heroes who seem to own half the planet and zip around in limos. But then look at Nora Roberts: her Roarke probably owns several planets, whereas some of her other heroes work in the trades.