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My Take in Brief: I loved it, but you should click to one of the other reviews listed below for a more traditional review. In this post, I mainly explore feminist themes in the book.

Hero and Heroine: Both workaholic, intelligent, great looking, successful junior litigators at a large Chicago law firm, both hoping to make partner any day. J.D.’s the wealthy, conservative, golf enthusiast son of an admired judge. Payton’s the vegetarian feminist daughter of a single mom communist PETA loving hippie (and yes, I thought this an oddly WASPish name choice for this character, too). Thanks to their differences in worldview and the competitive environment of the firm, they’ve been antagonists trying comically to one up each other for 8 years.

Plot: The book is pretty light on plot, but as the novel opens, Payton and J.D. are in the final stretch of their 8 years bids to becomes partner. Long time rivals and antagonists, their boss asks them to team up to court an important client.  Sparks fly as the two ditch their prejudices and get to know each other as human beings, not just walking political slogans.

Excerpt here.

Word on the Web:

Babbling About Books, Katiebabs, A

Book Smuggler, Ana, 8

Book Binge, Rowena, 4.5 out of 5

Thrifty Reader, Ames, A

Romance Novel TV, Buffie, 4.5

All About romance, Ellen, B

Amazon.com, 4.5 stars after 6 reviews

Fun Factoid: This book feels a lot like a farcical romantic comedy — kind of like the one with George Clooney and Catherine Zeta Jones, or the one with Renee Zellweger and Ewan McGregor. It turns out the author is a former screenwriter, and herself viewed PMP in these terms.

Sad factoid: James’ next book has a suspense subplot. Sigh.

Racy Romance Review:

I had just finished Ms. James’ terrific debut novel, Just the Sexiest Man Alive, when I immediately downloaded this one (thanks Kindle!). I loved both books, but I wanted to write about this one, in particular, because PMP deals with workplace discrimination, class, and gender, all topics that interest me.

In both novels, the heroine is a litigator who defends corporations from sexual harassment lawsuits. This is the author’s own professional background, and it shows. Little details about court proceedings, like where the heroine stands in the courtroom to direct the attention of jurors, and about the big law firm environment, like the importance of not just of face time and billable hours, but less tangible things, like laughing at a senior partner’s jokes, helped to create a very authentic setting.

In James’ first book (which is unrelated to this one except thematically), the heroine is asked point blank by the hero how a woman could do this line of work. Her answer, reasonably, is that it’s in the interest of women to defend innocent clients against nonmeritorious lawsuits to keep the focus on the real culprits.  I imagine Payton’s view is the same. Of course, law firms don’t really care whether their clients are innocent, so I was left wondering what Payton would have done had she been asked to defend a guilty party. There’s always the argument that criminal defense lawyers urge: even if the defendant is guilty, justice requires that he get a fair trial. But I think there’s something a bit different about an avowed feminist defending guilty corporations in sexual harassment cases. Kind of like an avowed pacifist working for a weapons manufacturer. I’m not ready to say it can’t be done, but I wondered if Payton felt the tension.

Payton is described as a “liberal feminist” which I found very intriguing. Back in the day, we used to teach feminist theory in terms of political orientations (liberal, Marxist, socialist, radical), with liberal feminism referring to the strain of feminism best known in the US, beginning with the movement for women’s suffrage and growing into what’s now referred to as “second wave feminism”. The controlling idea of liberal feminism was that liberal democracy and capitalism are good, but women should be granted the same rights and privileges under this system as men. It short form, it’s known as the “me, too” feminism.  From a more radical, critical point of view, liberal feminism is associated with the white middle class heterosexual able bodied women who have it pretty good, but decry the “glass ceiling” at work and the “second shift” at home, which puts them at a disadvantage relative to their more privileged male partners. In practice, if not in theory, liberal feminists tend to focus on gender, working in attention to other overlapping forms of oppression when possible, and in this book peopled with all white, hetero, privileged characters, this viewpoint prevails. There’s a lot to be said in defense of liberal feminism from these charges, but it’s not necessary to do so in this review because this is the view of LF we get in the book.

I really liked Payton. She is strong, smart, funny, and — like J.D. — incredibly anxious over the partner thing. She’s prone at times to negative emotions, like jealousy, envy, schadenfreude, spite. She’s very, very human. Payton’s “feminism” is signaled by her support of preferential promotion, a strong desire to be successful in her job, and her decision not to toss her career out like so much bath water after a lovely weekend with the hero. I’ll explain the scare quotes below.

For his part, J.D. is the rich boy, Ivy League, etc., etc., the guy with every advantage in life known to humankind, who yet feels oppressed by gender politics (he accuses Payton of having “the entire firm wrapped around one of her little liberal fingers”). I have met many of these young men in my life, and I would not normally say I am filled with sympathy for them, but Ms. James blinded me with her writing and made me love J.D. (I call this the “SEP effect”). He’s a bit of a dandy, takes himself too seriously, is terrified he won’t make partner — he’s motivated by the desire to prove himself to his titan of a disapproving father, whose nepotism he rejected early in his career — and he’s ripe for a comeuppance by the heroine. James and Payton have a lot of fun with him.

Interestingly, J.D. seems more interested in gender discrimination than Payton, despite the fact that it is Payton herself who faces overt and covert gender based discrimination. This is because a memo goes out saying that the firm hopes to increase the number of female partners by 10% in the next year, making J.D. feel sure he will lose out based on gender. J.D. is furious despite the fact that this policy will only bring the percentage to 28%, arguing “There is no glass ceiling anymore — these women whose to leave the workforce of their own volition … it’s reverse discrimination.”

J.D. uses the rhetoric of choice to defend the lack of representation of women in the upper echelons of his firm. This is a common strategy. Why do more women than men “choose” to get on the mommy track? Gee, I guess they just want to. And why don’t more men do it? Gee, I guess they just happen NOT to want to. The way choices are structured by gender, race, class, social and work environments, wage scales, discrimination, health policy, daycare, tradition, etc,. etc, etc. all fades away. J.D. is a very real character with very typical views.

I really appreciated the fact that James was willing to raise these issues in a romance novel. If Payton gets the partnership, J.D. will blame her gender (affirmative action policies), and if J.D. gets it, Payton will blame his gender (and class: he’s part of the old boy network). I know that romances do deal with many important issues other than romantic love, and I blogged about this over at Dear Author a few months ago. But in my (admittedly limited) experience, facing gender inequality directly is not common in contemporaries, I would guess because dealing with those issues is in tension with making the antagonists love each other.

But look how James does it. In this scene, the two are arguing in the stacks of the firm’s library, after just discovering the odds of both of them making partner are vanishingly small:

J.D. followed after her. “Are you saying I don’t deserve this?” he demanded. “I’ve billed over twenty-nine hundred hours for the past eight years!”

Payton whipped around, “So have I! And the only difference between you and me is that statistics say you’re more likely to keep it up. The firm doesn’t worry that one day you’ll decide you want to leave at five to kiss your kids goodnight.”

J.D. stepped closer to her. Then closer again, literally trapping her against the bookshelves.

“Spare me the feminist rant, Payton. It’s getting a little tired. I’ve had to work my ass off to get where I am, while you had your ticket written from the minute you stepped into this firm.”

Payton felt her face flush with anger. “Really? Well, you know what I think, J.D.? She jabbed his chest with one of her fingers. “I think that you are an uptight, pony-owning, trickle-down-economics-loving, Scotch-on-the-rocks-drinking, my-wife-better-take-my-last-name sexist jerk!”

J.D. grabbed her hand and pulled it away. “Well, at least I’m not a stubborn, button-pushing, Prius-driving, chip-on-your-shoulder-holding, ‘stay-at-home-mom’ is the eighth-dirty-word-thinking feminist!”

He had her pressed against the bookshelves, his body against hers, her hand pinned to her side as he glared down at her. She glared up at him right back.

He was furious. So was she.

Neither of them moved. And in that moment, the strangest thought popped into Payton’s head.

She had the feeling that J.D. was going to kiss her.

And–even stranger — she had a feeling that she just might let him.

I am not going to get into the pros and cons of preferential hiring and promotion in this post, except to say that I thank God Ms. James got it right by portraying the kinds of policies that actually exist — the ones where gender and race can serve as a “plus factor” in deciding between two equally qualified candidates. Too many people think affirmative action means hiring unqualified candidates.  There are lots of good arguments for “plus factor” policies, including the value of diversity (“diversity” itself can mean lots of different things, but to give one example, Payton herself acknowledges that a female attorney on the team is crucial for defending law firms against sexual harassment), reparations for past discrimination (this is especially strong for race based preferential hiring), and, my favored argument, combating continued and ongoing harmful workplace discrimination.

As I mentioned above, Payton faces gender based discrimination (or at least what we call “secondary sexism”, the effect of a sexist environment that puts her at a disadvantage)  throughout the book. She notices the unfair advantages that rich white men like J.D. receive (he may have better credentials — like the Ivy League degrees– but it is likely that he faced fewer obstacles in getting them, an argument for not evaluating candidates by credentials alone), and is especially attuned to class advantages, but I did wish she took the sexism she faced more to heart.

While Payton strongly rejects J.D.’s arguments against preferential promotion (“Why don’t you look around this firm sometime — everyone here is just like you, J.D. White with a penis.”), she is curiously lacking in energetic responses to the ways sexism hurts her personally. For example, early on, she mentions that she feels less comfortable with the senior male partners than J.D. As a woman, she just doesn’t have the easy rapport with them that J.D. enjoys. This is a gender thing, but Payton refers to it as the firm being “old-fashioned” and resolves to be friendlier. I realize there’s not really a better strategy until she makes partner, but if she’s a “feminist”, I think her perception of the awkward interactions with Ben would have been more overtly gendered.  When J.D. plans a golf outing at a course that does not allow women, thus excluding Payton from several hours of interaction with important potential clients, he is clearly using gender, and class as well (golf lessons were not on her mother’s hippie agenda), as a way to one up her in the race to partner. But again, she shrugs it off.

MILD SPOILER ALERT

Later in the book, when we discover something truly reprehensible that J.D. has done, something that has likely made Payton’s career and reputation suffer for the duration of her tenure at the law firm, she doesn’t fight back, personally or professionally (my one disappointment with the book). In my view, what it means to me to be a feminist is recognizing that when these things happen, it’s not just one individual (J.D.) doing it:  it’s a part of a system (yes, the patriarchy) that needs to be understood and combated.  For an avowedly political person, it was curious to me that Payton did not easily or fully politicize sexism when it was directed at her.  Would doing so have made her seem strident to readers? Maybe.

END SPOILER

I’ve focused on gender, but the class issues are very interesting as well. The conflict in Payton’s relationship with her mother is the amount of money she earns, and it’s a bit troubling for Payton herself. It’s curious that someone with her upbringing would have chosen the type of law she did, and the work environment she did, and I would have liked more backstory on her character — why did she take that path?

Ms. James knows class differences, and she nails J.D., who is really a snob. At one point he ponders that his clients “did not pay to have their uber-important opposition to class certificaton motions argued by some jackass who looked like he’d spilled his Dunkin’ Donuts Coffee Coollatta all over himself while driving in from the suburbs in his Ford Taurus”. I found myself wondering if middle class romance readers would feel insulted by that line (as an academic, I’m classless. ;) ).

Most of these issues do not get resolved by the end of the book — J.D. does not, for example, sell his Bentley to pay for the construction of hospitals in Rwanda — but, Pride and Prejudice style, falling in love with each other helps Payton and J.D. gain more empathy for “the other side”, and, in a very satisfying ending, they do succeed in establishing a new lifestyle without compromising their own values.

I’m sorry to have gone on so long about the book’s politics, because this is really a pretty light, fun, and funny book. In fact, the revelations about J.D. that come late in the book sucker-punched me precisely because I had been coasting along enjoying their banter and sexual tension so much. I can say that one of the above revelations gave me the kind of heartbreak, and the other the kind of joy, that I only feel when I am totally invested in a book and its characters.

I complained above that Ms. James apparently has decided to turn against the very reader who has written what is likely to be the longest review in the blogphere of her book by venturing into said reviewer’s least favorite subgenre, the dreaded rom suspense. Practice Makes Perfect was so much fun and so enjoyable, however, that I am willing to read whatever the heck she decides to write, and cannot wait to do so.

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